As a result of tourism and increasing number of people travelling, there is an growing demand for more flights.
With the growth of tourism and populace traversing around has been increased, which rises the demand of more air plane. The main problem this causes is pollution and the most viable solution is to encourage the people to use alternate transportation channels.
The principle problem associated with travel though air craft is that it pollutes the environment. This is because the harmful gases like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide and nitrogen oxides that are emitted through plane get mixed with Stratosphere layer of atmosphere. This result in chemical reactions in the air and pollute the surroundings. Recent survey carried out by Ministry of Health, shows that environmental impact of travelling by air per kilometre is greater as compared to other forms of transport such as driving.
To tackle this problem, the government should launch a publicity campaign in the media and in schools to educate about the dangers of travelling through flights and imitates other travelling modes. Traversing through alternate channels like driving and train for shorter distances should be encouraged to reduce the amount of green house gases in the atmosphere. An awareness camp could shed some light on this difficult situation and also people to be more open and honest about it. For example, a similar initiative in China resulted in a 70% decrease in emission of these gases with increased usage of other modes of transport.
In conclusion, increased travellers through air plane is a major issue that can result in imbalance in the atmosphere due to more hazardous gases however, this can be addressed through educating people about the dangers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...velling by air per kilometre is greater as compared to other forms of transport su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31939163498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77270011929 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8173912969 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.181818182 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149586022845 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564596359203 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528526978401 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973611818914 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462721596701 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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