Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, education plays a vital role in the career of a student. In this competitive world, making students learn irrelevant subjects which are of no use for their future must be stopped teaching in universities. In fact, courses which can prepare them to face the corporate world must be taught.I agree, that students ought to be forced to learn needless subjects.
Corporate today look for candidates who are well-trained or educated in his field of study. Students pay enormous fees for their courses and study irrelevant subjects, since corporate look for students who are trained explicitly in one specialization. For instance, a student who dreams of joining a management job is forced to study subjects like history which does not improve his skills in any means. In fact, it's a compulsion to study history to complete the course to receive his degree completion.
Corporate are looking for employees who are ready to work from day one. They don't want to spend their time training these employees. Therefore, companies desire candidates who are industry ready and can meet tasks from the word go. But even the corporate are facing challenges in recruiting good employees. As a solution, the corporate and colleges can have a mutual understanding and can develop a course which can be of industry requirement. For instance, industry experts can teach students about the required skills that are needed for their future endeavors. Hence, students are taught directly by the experts and after they graduate it will be helpful and uncomplicated in securing a good job. The practical knowledge that the student received will be beneficial, and there will be less jobless students.
To conclude, it is significant that candidates receive practical knowledge of their future career. When companies employee graduates it is must that they are well prepared in the career path he has opted. Studying subjects like history are useful for a candidate who chose their career in archaeology, but a management student or doctor studying this subject is irrelevant for their future. Therefore, it's essential that in colleges students learn subjects that are required for the career path they have decided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...opped teaching in universities. In fact, courses which can prepare them to face t...
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Suggestion: I
...face the corporate world must be taught.I agree, that students ought to be forced...
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...prove his skills in any means. In fact, its a compulsion to study history to comple...
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...ho are ready to work from day one. They dont want to spend their time training these...
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... Therefore, companies desire candidates who are industry ready and can meet tasks from ...
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...tical knowledge of their future career. When companies employee graduates it is must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20728291317 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78915089686 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5974210856 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8421052632 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100149853473 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352083731321 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259416704266 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677796695055 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189711735345 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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