Science could help people live up to 100 or 200 years. Would it be a good or bad development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believe that the social life will be in danger and have high intensity of crimes if the government do not apply death sentences. I completely agree with that point of view.
Firstly, it is ovious that criminal has nothing to be afraid if they are not dead. they believe they can take a risk because they do not need to face serious consequences which society commit to. The mafia can assure many criminals that they can have the luxurious life in prison if the worst consequence happen. when it occurs, society have to observe many cruel actions from cold blood people. Citizens will be the people suffering many losses than criminals. For example, Kha Banh killed two people to take money and gold from Hoang Bich shop but the judge believed he had mental disease and canceled death punishment. After that, when he complete the period in prison, he was taken out and continuely kill one more person. it raise the hatred between many people in Viet Nam. that is the event we do not want to witness from the sympathy of the judge.
Secondly, with many cruel action affecting to human life, they deserved to be punished. I have seen many mothers losing their son and daughter just because of ambition of thiefs and robbers. nothing to redem their losses and they just hope take back justify for innocent people. if the government sympathize with criminals, who will sympathize for them ? it is not fair if our decisions are too emotional and tolerant. many criminals can restart their life but the deaths they create for mothers can not be forgotten. we need to think straightly about the truth that the criminal need to be dead to soothe the pains mothers suffer
In conclusion, I claim that death punishment need to be committed by the judge. if not, we successively suffers more and more losses criminals create/
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...hing to be afraid if they are not dead. they believe they can take a risk because th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...prison if the worst consequence happen. when it occurs, society have to observe many...
^^^^
Line 9, column 728, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ut and continuely kill one more person. it raise the hatred between many people in...
^^
Line 9, column 731, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...and continuely kill one more person. it raise the hatred between many people in Viet ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 781, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...hatred between many people in Viet Nam. that is the event we do not want to witness ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nothing
...ause of ambition of thiefs and robbers. nothing to redem their losses and they just hop...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... take back justify for innocent people. if the government sympathize with criminal...
^^
Line 13, column 356, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...iminals, who will sympathize for them ? it is not fair if our decisions are too em...
^^
Line 13, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...cisions are too emotional and tolerant. many criminals can restart their life but th...
^^^^
Line 13, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...reate for mothers can not be forgotten. we need to think straightly about the trut...
^^
Line 17, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ment need to be committed by the judge. if not, we successively suffers more and m...
^^
Line 17, column 105, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'suffer'
Suggestion: suffer
...d by the judge. if not, we successively suffers more and more losses criminals create/
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80466472303 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37306181767 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9516556218 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4761904762 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686808476263 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232226267783 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247191367365 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464896763699 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018532673639 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.