Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?
Art and science are the two most important pillars of society. Some people have a thought that science professionals are respected more by the public when compared to the musician and artist. I, firmly agree with the fact.
To begin with, artists and musicians have to struggle a lot in their life for earning an optimum livelihood, only a handful of artists live a prosperous life. Additionally, this field does not guarantee employment opportunities hence, despite spending numerous years in the same sector for polishing their skills they need an additional source of income for a better lifestyle. Therefore, people do not like to opt for art or music as the main subjects as these subjects are known as recreational subjects only hence, in college, they are allotted hardly one or two hours for relaxing purposes.
On the other hand, scientists and innovators always get respect from the public as they are the reason for the society we are living in. They always try to make the society free from huddles, safe and comfortable to live. Innovations by science like mobile phones which has made communication easy with near and dears, washing machines have made household jobs easy and many more. Apart from all this, there are always lots of opportunities for these students and have access to a better future with a handsome amount of salary for living life. They are respected by the society the main reason for they get gratitude from people is, they provide safety at risking their own health and the most recent example is COVID-19, scientist and doctors are trying their best to find solutions for tackling this deadly disease even after coming in direct contact with the infected patients.
To conclude, musicians and artists are also important, but as these fields do not guaranty a better future people do not like to study it. Scientists and technology specialist risk their lives for the public and invent new technology for making the earth a better, comfortable and safe place to live hence, get more respect in return.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95626822157 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56089550547 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8450865605 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119338631225 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521463547155 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429910050384 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930062263195 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462278908093 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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