Scientists believe that the world is in danger due to environmental changes.
Some people say that personal lifestyle changes should be made to reduce the damage to environment while others think that the government should do something to held. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Researchers believe that deteriorating environmental conditions has putting adverse effects on globe. It is argued by some that the harmful effects of same can be tackled by making change in living style of human beings while others consider it government's responsibility to address the problem. According to me mutual efforts of both can make difference.
Firstly, for those who advocate that individual ways of living if changed can helps in lowering the side effects of it on climate.This is due to the reason that human get maximum resources from nature and their endless demand is putting extreme pressure on nature so it is believed that if desires are controlled human will stop overburdening the sources eventually stop harming environment. Secondly, pollution caused by litter is directly attacking the surrounding so if an individual takes care of waste produced by him and take initiative of using biodegradable products then their will be half war win situation. Last but not least, emission of gases or fumes from vehicles, refrigerator or air conditioner has worsen the situation it is not possible to eradicate it from human life but judicious use of encouragement directly benefits the climate.
On the flip side, critics said that instead of fixing an individual responsibility government must take initiative to address the problem. For them it is said that strict rules for waste or traffic management and alike, to be implemented by authorities and fines will imposed to the non followers to protect the globe. For instance, in capital Delhi the rule of odd-even vehicle on road implemented by government, has successfully helped in improving the air quality of area. That's why it is stressed by some that government can take preventive measures for protection of atmosphere.
In light of above I believe that mutual efforts from both sides is only answer to the problem. Human for his greed has made an irreparable damages to the environment so only way to compensate it is to go hand in hand with government to protect mother nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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...ndividual ways of living if changed can helps in lowering the side effects of it on c...
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...ering the side effects of it on climate.This is due to the reason that human get ma...
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...he side effects of it on climate.This is due to the reason that human get maximum...
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...f war win situation. Last but not least, emission of gases or fumes from vehicles...
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Suggestion: worsened
...es, refrigerator or air conditioner has worsen the situation it is not possible to era...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...plemented by authorities and fines will imposed to the non followers to protect the glo...
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...d in improving the air quality of area. Thats why it is stressed by some that governm...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'damage'?
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...n for his greed has made an irreparable damages to the environment so only way to compe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13392857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00343335045 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.345643041 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.75 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133142924698 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489444408133 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459522016217 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887733752468 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510753696173 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.