Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
It’s a human nature which attract people easily towards bad habits despite of healthy habits. Some activities are scientifically proven healthy, and some others are cranky. But still, people adopt the activities which are bad for wellbeing. We’ll discuss in this essay about reasons and possible solutions to address this concern.
In the modern age, mindset of people has changed, they put their life on stake and keep searching pleasure and enjoyment no matter how harmful the effects are. Firstly, some bad habits can make a person addictive such as smoking and excessive use of alcohol. Therefore, a person can be easily caught into a net and biggest cause of this is a circle of bad companions, hereupon it becomes hard nut to crack to come out of this. Moreover, sedentary lifestyle of people doesn’t allow them to be active to reform themselves and to do some exercise to stay fit. For instance, a person working into a global organization works round the clock in rotational shifts.
To address this, multiple solutions can be proposed. One of which is imposing higher taxes on unhealthy products such as cigarette, alcohol and food with high concentration of fat. In addition, a healthy lifestyle should be promoted, and likewise unhealthy lifestyle should be criticized all over in newspapers and televisions. Moreover, people with a self-sense to stay fit see that everybody is following the good practices, So, I believe that they would find it easier to break their destructive way of live life.
To conclude that indulgences of people with unhealthy activities are mainly caused by the addictions to certain things. It is not easy to change people mindset to remove these bad habits but can be stopped with a self-initiative and strong willpower.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0813559322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85415676846 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3876657979 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211862937787 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780924113342 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463870282095 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136536449082 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543574098636 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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