When it comes to speaking about which is good or bad for our health the opinion is still divided. Despite several medical studies have clearly shown what can improve or deteriorate our physical condition, millions are still following unhealthy habits. Aim of this essay is to briefly illustrate the effects of some activities on our body.
Over the past decades research supported by sound scientific evidences, have demonstrated that exercising is instrumental in preventing severe diseases that can lead to dangerous medical conditions and sometimes even to death. For instance, lack of movement is the most common factor linked to obesity. Overweight is also responsible for cardiovascular disorders, stroke, and diabetes. Scientific evidence also bolsters the detrimental effect of a diet based on high-calories snacks, fast food, soft drinks, and sugar. Although the consequences mentioned above are well known and plenty of information about it is easily accessible on the Internet, millions stubbornly continue to stick to detrimental habits.
There is no need to go so far to find the reasons of this behavior, since they root basically in the human nature itself. Activities like smoking or eating junk food activate a reward mechanism embedded in our brain that in turn releases hormones that provide a sense of well-being. It is nothing less that addiction. As a consequence, breaking this addiction becomes for many a hard task to accomplish. Some do not even try to dismiss those unhealthy habits. On the other hand, others make incredible efforts to improve their health condition, by exercising, by cutting down on sugar, fruit juices, and smoke.
To conclude, the reasons concealed behind unhealthy habits are largely connected to the human nature. Addiction to some substances like tobacco and sugar can represent an obstacle difficult to come over. Yet, there is good news. In spite of the fact that discarding those habits is an up-hill battle, it worth fighting it. Just losing a little weight, for example, has a dramatic effect on the general medical condition, let alone quitting smoke. Thousands have tried to live healthier. Many have failed and many have succeed, but hose who have never tried are destined to lose from the beginning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 519, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, speaking about, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27071823204 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80959733493 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4701632517 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225957172272 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540764099715 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468403639244 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131600587301 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768218478312 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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