Some people think that if a country is already rich any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The pursuit of happiness is something so special that the Founding Fathers saw it as a human right in the Declaration of Independence. Whether being rich does actually people happy is still up for debate and this issue leaves many questions open.
there is no doubt that bein well-off represents an immense advantage in day-to-day life, it allows to have the best medical assistance, to attend the most famous universities and to travel all around the world. Some argue, in contrary, that money cannot make people happy and that other values are crucial to gaining a fulfilled life.
Health, love, kindness cannot be bought or borrowed, they can earned only through passion, empathy and generosity. Therefore I would tend to agree to large extent with the statement which making the financial situation of the citizens better would not make their lives happier. On the other hand I would suggest not depicting money as the root of evil, for many reasons. First of all, money give people the freedom. Somebody wrote that freedom is the right to choose: the right to create for oneself the alternatives of choice. Consequently without money there would be no freedom. Governments should take action to hobble poverty and to build the foundations of economic freedom so that everybody could reach a stable financial condition.
To close, if it goes without saying that money cannot buy happiness, being rich allows to enjoy not only the superficial aspect of life, like parties, travels or expensive dinners, but also to have access to reliable medical treatments, to afford to buy a home and to have the possibility of forging its own destiny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02554744526 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59484944581 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6341132077 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12039044236 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415495502254 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443360357586 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631537694157 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247198361388 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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