Shopping is the favourite pastime for most of the young people.
why do you think is that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?
In the recent years, shopping is the prime hobby for the teenage people. I assume that this may be they are not finding other options which was present in the past.I believe whether or not younger generation should involve themselves productive activities like reading .
going to the outlet for purchasing goods become one the important habit for the juvenile. Due to the rising amount of shopping centre , and also those places are so near to residents, went for buying easily. Although they do not need any particular product. For example, researcher published an article in the time magazine that 80% young people . Thus, it is clear that going to shopping is increased because of conveniency.
younger citizen should adopt other kind of pastime such as reading or swimming. By studying they can develop their inner sense of humour, followed by learning or practicing swimming would be kept them fit. Having said that teenage people should use their time effectively. If they use their time with shaping their next life, it would bring more best ramification than doing shopping leisurely. For example, people who read lots of novel become more sense of humour than other people, those people can solve their everyday problem easily without help of others.Therefore, it is indeed important to incorporate with different activities by the teen.
In conclusion, despite being the habit of younger generations to go to mall for this easiets route. indeed it is necessary to develop reading habit as well as swimming for their better health for future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... the teenage people. I assume that this may be they are not finding other options whic...
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Suggestion: I
...r options which was present in the past.I believe whether or not younger generati...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...which was present in the past.I believe whether or not younger generation should involve thems...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...elves productive activities like reading . going to the outlet for purchasing go...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Going
... productive activities like reading . going to the outlet for purchasing goods beco...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... to the rising amount of shopping centre , and also those places are so near to re...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r to residents, went for buying easily. Although they do not need any particular product...
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... the time magazine that 80% young people . Thus, it is clear that going to shoppin...
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Suggestion: Younger
...is increased because of conveniency. younger citizen should adopt other kind of past...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'best' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: best
...shaping their next life, it would bring more best ramification than doing shopping leisur...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the best'.
Suggestion: more the best
...shaping their next life, it would bring more best ramification than doing shopping leisur...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n doing shopping leisurely. For example, people who read lots of novel become mor...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...y problem easily without help of others.Therefore, it is indeed important to incorporate ...
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Suggestion: Indeed
...s to go to mall for this easiets route. indeed it is necessary to develop reading habi...
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Suggestion: indeed,
...s to go to mall for this easiets route. indeed it is necessary to develop reading habi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for their better health for future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60032246785 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7137533848 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237680081794 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789965008862 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347178476111 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132475850419 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421805651727 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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