Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance?
Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Art museums and galleries undoubtedly, holds a significant and inevitable importance in the life of human beings and society while helping them to understand the cultural rituals and traditions of the nation. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. In this essay, a debate will be discussed and, given a concluding view.
On the one hand, proponents who support the idea of seeing the museums with no cost cite various benefits, it can bring to the museums. Firstly, it can help art galleries to gain popularity based on the events by showcasing well known and famous historical paintings and sculptures. In addition to this, it can arouse interest especially in the young children to go and visit these places while giving their guardians a chance to explore the new things displayed in museum. Secondly, With no cost, It would not only attract the visitors but also can increase the attendance mainly of the local tourists because of workshops related to their interests. For instance, National Museum Library conduct regular workshop on literature, science and technology which not only gives the platform to international researchers but also the encourages the local people to share their knowledge and expertise.
Conversely, opponents point out their view that museums should levy a minimal charge on people for visiting the art museums because it would help them to preserve and restore the artefacts in museum. Secondly, With less number of conservationists based on the unavailability of government funds it can help museum to revive back in the economy. Furthermore, the cost earned would be spent on improving the infrastructure, maintenance facilities and advanced technology which can help to protect the old things at museums.
Overall, it seems reasonable to levy a small amount on people which can help the conservationists to protect and conserve the historical things to show it to next generation to identify how the things were in the 20th century and how people used to spend their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96444513393 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7780934334 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.416666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150535032421 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553133677908 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527055405712 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881444206539 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469499607161 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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