Social media has many positive uses, but there have been some negative consequences to it as well. Identify a problem caused by social media and describe the solutions you would propose to address this problem.
Many people argue that social media has been often associated with some problems. This essay will discuss some causes of these problems as well as some possible solutions to tackle them.
Two of the biggest problems resulting from social media are physical and psychological problems. In terms of physical problems, social media is known as a main reason why current generation do not have enough physical activities than previous ones did. For example, the excessive use of social media causes 10 per cent of the British children between 7 and 15 to suffer from obesity. Moreover, those who spend more than three hours per day in social media have low skill in making a good relationship. According to recent studies in the UK, these people have higher chance to get depression and anxiety in their life time.
There are some actions can be done to deal with these problems. Firstly, people should be aware of dire consequences of social media. Therefore, government, non-profit organizations and even individuals should take their responsibilities in raising public awareness about negative effects. Secondly, in my personal perspective, people can use some optional restricting apps with the aim of lowering their dependency of social media. For example, there are some apps to give applicants to use social media, such as Facebook and Snapchat, for just short time period per day.
In conclusion, I believe that social media like a double-edged sword and we should be aware of their destructive effects. Raising public awareness as well as using some restricting apps could be two steps to deal with problems caused by social media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has often been
Many people argue that social media has been often associated with some problems. This ess...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... to get depression and anxiety in their life time. There are some actions can be done...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ression and anxiety in their life time. There are some actions can be done to de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16479400749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73564677424 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5542805683 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363571752096 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136074223143 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758789703318 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248891398125 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654379062716 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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