In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to
be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
In many parts of US, adolescents are under ban, according to which they are restricted to be outside
their homes in night after a specific time if they are not accompanied with an adult. In my opinion,
this is essential in order to ensure their safety and prevent them from involving in some detrimental
activities.
Safety of the child is of paramount importance for any parent and in some areas, this is often
compromised during late nights. Firstly, as per the statistics, some localities and areas have a higher
crime rate as compared to others. The miscreants and peccadillos operate in night after a particular
time, hence, in such cases, it is advisable and sensible that teenagers, who are naïve and sometimes
volatile in their behaviour in handling such criminals, should be accompanied by the adult to deter
the crime and mishap. Further, some areas are prone to accident mainly due to rush of heavy good
vehicles, so adult’s presence and their driving experience prevents adolescents from any accidental
hazards.
Moreover, there are many anti-social groups that operate during night and try to entice the young
teenagers into activities that are detrimental for them such as, drugs and alcohol consumption.
Presence of an adult or a parent dissuades them in approaching the teenager and hence prevents
them from getting involved in activities that are baneful for them as an individual, as well as has
harmful effects on the society and community.
In conclusion, it is pivotal for teenager’s safety and holistic growth without any interruption that
they are accompanied by an adult after a certain time in night, hence the curfew is rightly justified.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... advisable and sensible that teenagers, who are naïve and sometimes volatile in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25912408759 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9035157753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9863299012 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.111111111 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294752284863 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114053717507 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789496259345 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840299332026 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758423639406 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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