In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
United States is popular in the world for enforcing strict laws such as curfews for the benefit of the nation, which prohibit juveniles from going outside alone in the late night hours. This law enforcement has both positive as well as negative impacts on the society. I have mixed viewpoints on this regard and this essay will discuss both viewpoints with suitable examples.
To begin with positive side, some of the US areas such as Chicago and San Diego have high crime rate, particularly in dark hours. A recent report generated by US Police Department, states that Chicago has reached on the top of the all other cities in terms of criminal activities taking place at dusk. Therefore, to ensure the safety of the minors from criminal activities such as juvenile kidnapping, there is a need to impose curfews.
On the other hand, arresting of juveniles during curfew time has detrimental effects on the society. One local newspaper has published that 90% of the arrested juveniles were black, while 10% were white, whereas the country has majority of the white population. This clearly shows the unbiased behavior by the cops, which certainly has a negative impact on the citizens of the country. Moreover, majority of the arrested children were neither drug takers, nor chain smokers nor involved in any other crime activities but were roaming around casually. Being caught by cops sometimes leave an impression of uncasual behavior by them, which later lead them to the victims of the bullying at school.
In conclusion, the US laws such as curfews were introduced by administration for the welfare of the nation but due to aforementioned affects, these laws impact the society negatively also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...amples. To begin with positive side, some of the US areas such as Chicago and San Diego ...
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...fore, to ensure the safety of the minors from criminal activities such as juvenil...
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...hese laws impact the society negatively also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07092198582 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63222820452 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7524384164 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14466288196 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496320655073 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308593553344 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076787134842 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199062480759 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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