Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In today’s world where everything is a commercialized, child health has become very important subject of discussion among masses. People debate who should play an important role in the development of child eating habit. Some believe its parents sole responsibility to make sure child eating habits are healthy, while some argue that teachers should take lead role in developing healthy eating habits among pupils. However, from my perspective both parents and teachers should contribute in the development of healthy eating routine for a child.
The first reason of the view is related to people who believe that parents should be take sole responsibility to develop healthy eating routine of their children. For instance, by providing children with home cooked food instead of giving them money to buy products available in schools canteen. With regards to children taking money to school, they purchase high sugary, fizzy drink and confectionery items. Moreover, high calorie foods like French fries, burgers and chocolates are also easily available to which children more attractive. Due to the fact that these are the main causes of increasing number of child obesity in our society. Furthermore, such un-healthy items have detrimental effect on child mental and physical growth.
On the other hand some people believe that teachers should be solely responsible to educate and develop healthy eating routine of a child. The reason to have such instance is due to the fact that in this modern age there are many families where both parents are working. Therefore, it is not possible for them to provide home cooked foods on daily basis which in other case can be provided by parents where mothers are mainly house wives and stays at home. Therefore in such cases teachers should educate and keep vigilance on children eating patterns and selection of food from schools tuck shop which are full of unhealthy items.
To conclude I believe both parents and teachers should ensure that eating habit of child are healthy which in fact is very important for this mental and physical growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18879056047 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56177325116 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2236377694 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339020716329 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122830358853 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114172791869 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226024336515 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027953736034 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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