Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In today’s world where everything is a commercialized, child health has become very important subject of discussion among masses. People debate who should play an important role in the development of child eating habit. Some believe its parents sole responsibility to make sure child eating habits are healthy, while some argue that teachers should take lead role in developing healthy eating habits among pupils. However, from my perspective both parents and teachers should contribute in the development of healthy eating routine for a child.
The first reason of the view is related to people who believe that parents should be take sole responsibility to develop healthy eating routine is by providing children with home cooked food instead of giving them money to buy products available in schools tuck shop. With regards to children taking money to school buy high sugary, fizzy drink, confectionary items and calorie dense foods like French fries and chocolates which are very easily available to them and children tend to get more attractive towards such products. Due to the fact which are the main cause of increasing number of child obesity in our society. Furthermore, such un-healthy items also have detrimental effect on child mental and physical growth.
On the other hand some people believe teachers should be solely responsible to educate and develop healthy eating routine of a child are due to the effects that in this modern age there are many families where both parents are working. Therefore, it is not possible for them to provide home cooked foods on daily basis which in other case can be provided by parents where mothers are mainly house wives and stays at home. Therefore in such cases teachers should educate and keep vigilance on children eating patterns and selection of food from schools tuck shop which are full of unhealthy items.
To conclude I believe both parents and teachers should ensure that eating habit of child are healthy which infact is very important for this mental and physical growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14714714715 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5373793863 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51951951952 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3512964381 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322410575629 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131836876103 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103725183157 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21913774307 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426455786033 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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