1. Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents the teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether instill healthy diet culture among children is the commitment of their parents or school teachers is often debated issue. Although teachers have not had an essential role to play in this important area of a child's development because their prime attention is to educate him school curriculum, the major role is, and will always be, on parents because they have the ability and time to do so.
On the one hand, some people would argue that teaching pupils about healthy food and good nutrition dietary should be teacher responsibility because of their influence during this early age, and the children may follow their instructions more than they might do with their parents. However, teachers often have other objectives to be accomplished, such as preparing for classes, assessing their pupils, delivering theoretical and practical sessions. As a result, if we depend only on educators to establish such positive eating habits amongst the youngsters, this would be unfair and irrational because they are tied up most of their time during a school hectic day. For example, one of my friends, who is an English teacher, told me that he cannot find time all the day along to teach any extras but only his subject because he has to work continuously 8 hours a day.
On the other hand, when it comes to children's well-being, parents are the most appropriate people to take the responsibility and to teach their offspring about the significance of eating healthy food. For example, it has been recently reported by Sweden Magazine called " a Healthy Child Food" that healthy and slim children are often raised by mothers who have a broad awareness about how important and essential it is to teach them all healthy eating practices, such as Avoiding sugary, fatty food, overeating or adding fresh vegetables and fruits to their daily meals. In addition to this, students usually have their meals with their families and only taking snacks at their schools; therefore, it can be understood that fathers and mothers are the major player in this arena.
Having presented the aforementioned ideas and examples, it can be concluded that despite the fact that teachers can play a complementary role to draw the attention of students to the importance of healthy culinary, it is parents who have the prime impact on a child's to transplant the value of eating organic, healthy and nutritious food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em all healthy eating practices, such as Avoiding sugary, fatty food, overeating ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05778894472 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69686956992 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540201005025 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7346594215 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.3 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338425436381 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14287000505 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839696086574 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202088530458 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739152423549 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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