Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?
Prohibition of teens to move outside their houses at night, if unaccompanied by an elder person, is being adopted by many countries in the form of imposing curfews. In my opinion, I agree that such night regulations will go a long way in improving the future of young people and benefits the families in the form of building relations.
To begin with, having tighter controls over teenagers going out at night, would certainly help in avoiding the risks they can cause to their future. In other words, children under 18, usually socialise during night parties, and the lack of maturity often entices them to indulge in drinking and turning to drugs, which can be very harmful for their future.
In many instances, minor crimes like vandalism, theft,and molestation that are committed at night, will be greatly reduced.
Another point to consider is that enacting rules for night vigilance would increase the family bonding time. As young people would be discouraged to move out, they will spend valuable time with their family members, resulting in better parent-child relationships, which may have been suffered owing to the more time devoted to friends instead with their siblings and parents. Moreover, this will minimise the family conflicts and arguments, which are common phenomena in the house, mainly when parents oppose their children going out at night.
In conclusion, although curfew curtail some freedom of youngsters, it provides a great deal of advantages in terms of protecting the teenagers against crimes that may be inflicted upon them while being alone outdoors during late hours, and also fostering mutual understanding between members of a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26022304833 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63091991728 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0751409291 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.222222222 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253869719405 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994384334592 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299232411728 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126652504556 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204225172482 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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