Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree?
The increasing crime-rate is matter of concern for most of the countries, creating a dilemma for officials in choosing the right strategy to crack down this predicament. Many governments came to an agreement that adding more officers to an already large police force is an effective deterrent against criminal activity. In my opinion, Along with strengthening of police defense system in the country, some other steps should also be taken to use advance technology and modern tools to ensure country's security.
Undoubtedly, the criminals are always fearful of armed cops on the streets, and it provides a sense of security among citizens. In other words, increasing surveillance on roads would make wrongdoers think twice before committing a crime; they would definitely hesitate taking a chance in such circumstances. Secondly, recruiting more officials in the law enforcement departments would allow less monitored areas to get equal attention like others. For instance, in the capital city of India, it is observed that snatching incidents have reduced by 75% because of the deployment of cops with Guns.
Moreover, having more police officials monitoring every area of a particular city provides a sense of security and the utmost safety among fellow citizens. People can sleep peacefully keeping in mind that they are being taken care of by the professional police officers. In addition, such officers are highly trained to tackle any kind of crime or uncertainty. To illustrate, the beautiful city of Chandigarh in India is popular for its zero or very less criminal rate resulting from extreme supervision from cops around the borders of city.
Apart from this, advanced monitoring tools like CCTV and scanners can help the police in patrolling; the footage can threaten the burglars as it would bring the offender behind the bars due to film captured. Thus, modern machines and its training play indispensable role in keeping the crime-rate under control.
To sum up, I pen down saying, increasing the staff in the police is the best way to handle this ever increasing crime. Besides providing satisfaction among the fellow citizens that they are protected at all times, it would increase fear among such wrongdoers and these people would be thinking twice before committing any sort of offense. Moreover, advance technologies can aid in patrolling and keeping crime under check.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35433070866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82065664557 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5845120439 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25478933125 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742812532901 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505482907221 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134913284797 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576843263854 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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