Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it as a good thing while others disagree Give your opinion and explain both views
Nowadays, the trend that the teenagers working as part time employees is increasing enormously in many countries around the globe. some people consider, earning from teenage to be a very good practice. While others think that teenagers should on the whole concentrate on their studies. Though there are few factors which deny teenagers from working, I strongly believe that having job in the teenage is very important for students to enhance their confidence levels in all the means of their life.
In recent times, the students in their teenage are encouraged to work as interns in many companies, which has a numerous advantages. Firstly, earning while studying will help them to support themselves financially, and boost the confidence in them to live independently. With this experience, the teenagers will adapt themselves to working with people of different kinds and adjust to difficult situations in life. Secondly, the people working in their teens will develop the problem solving skills very easily and would learn to cope up with colleagues in a friendly manner. In addition to this, the real time working experience will help them understand the concepts in their studies easily.
Furthermore, the students who work in their part time, feel comfortable and flexible while working at job after their studies when compared to others teenagers who are not encouraged to work.
On the other hand, As every coin has both the sides, Promoting teenagers to work also have few disadvantages. The teenagers might face the problems related to stress as they have to manage the studies and the job at a time. For example, a teenager aged 17 years studying his intermediate and working as a data entry specialist in one of the profound companies in Hyderabad so as to fulfill financial needs, committed suicide due to unbearable stress. Few other student are being addicted to distressing habits such as alcohol for an instance, as they are able to earn their own money.
To conclude, While many students are benefited to earn while studying by upgrading their professional skills, interpersonal skills, Confidence levels, adaptability, few people ruin their lives by getting habituated to unpleasant habits which would have detrimental effect at later stage of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...in many companies, which has a numerous advantages. Firstly, earning while studying will h...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... would learn to cope up with colleagues in a friendly manner. In addition to this, the real time wor...
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Suggestion: part-time
...hermore, the students who work in their part time, feel comfortable and flexible while wo...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... of the profound companies in Hyderabad so as to fulfill financial needs, committed suic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, such as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23224043716 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78755617125 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8987404664 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197246562029 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793615527127 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537855969075 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123923829076 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629185709329 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.