In this contemporary world, the number of people suffering from health problems is being inclining with a great pace. Some individuals consider the excess intake of unhealthy eating stuff to be the major reason behind it and therefore believe that higher tax amount should be imposed on such items. This essay will argue as to why government bodies need to increase the tax on fast food but not beyond the limits.
People believe that junk food is responsible for making its consumers unhealthy and unfit because of some large amount of ingredients present in them that are not favorable for humans to live a healthy life. And, it is therefore necessary for the government authorities to take a strict action by increasing tax amount in order to minimize its consumption. For instance, sauces and dressings are the major constituents containing huge quantity of fats, trans-fats, et cetera, that found in almost every junk item; leading the society towards the health diseases like obesity, digestion. And if their prices would be raised, plethora of people will find it to be difficult to buy and eat it as it has already been difficult for people to earn their living due to high living cost and low income. That is why; there is a need of raising the cost of junk food.
However, I believe that raising the prices of such food items will only lower its consumption in lower and middle-class society because the higher class will never hesitate while spending their never-ending money. For example, most of the consumers of fast food come from higher class while the number of others is generally low. Thus, imposing higher taxes on junk food will never decline the sufficient amount of its customers and their health issues.
In conclusion, this essay argued why imparting huge tax on fast food is necessary but not beyond the limit. However, in my opinion, high price of these articles is never going to affect the health of people to a major extent and it is their sole responsibility to change their unhealthy eating habits to healthy ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87392550143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54407377904 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512893982808 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5306538288 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288162199766 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113838841555 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054356274267 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184394174317 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471471084291 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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