In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Nowadays, living as a tenant is becoming increasingly popular. Many people consider it safe and convenient while others prefer it since they cannot afford their own house. However, there are both pros and cons of living in a rented house. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living on rent.

First, living on rent provides freedom to move from one city to another without much trouble. Owing to the high competition, one cannot be sure of continuing his or her job for a lifetime at one place. So, one who lives in a rented house will have less trouble in switching job compare to the one who has purchased his own home. The second advantage of living on rent is that it is safe. Majority of tenants families are small and living away from their main family. In such situations, one can live on rent with other family or can take a house in gated society or an apartment for the safety reason.

The third point to support the argument is that it is not a cup of tea to purchase their own house. Nowadays, cities are becoming congested with little or no space to expand, and on the other hand, more and more people are coming in search of a good career. It has become almost impossible to purchase a house, particularly for the middle-class family.

Turning to the other side of the argument, having own house has numerous benefits. Firstly, in own place one can live without any restriction from the proprietor, enjoying the creativity of life. Secondly. Apart from removing unnecessary botheration, having own house can be considered a long-term investment which will eventually definitely increase one's wealth. Further, house ownership is a significant status in the current society. Personally, if I had money, I would purchase a house.

After looking at both sides of the argument, I can conclude that living on rent is advantageous for people who have instability in their job. On the other hand, people in business and people with a fixed position should make this choice based on their financial conditions.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, while, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70182936148 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539548022599 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2147401078 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160073347247 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551866749146 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605592623381 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990680539831 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700260008827 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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