In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A few countries are suffering from an increasing number incidents of shooting because many people possess guns at their home. In my opinion, I believe that easy access to weapons encourages its utilization but local surrounding also plays a crucial role.
To begin with, laws which allow keeping firearms are the key reason behind its increasing usage because of its easy accessibility; people do not even have second thought before firing it. Even though, the governments license it for individual security purposes, it creates more harm than good. Besides, there are a lot of situations where it could have been handled well if a gun was not there in the picture. Take for an example where a kid in the USA used a shotgun to teach a lesson to a bully and ended up killing him. Even mindset of people is getting too violent these days due to excessive exposure to video games, such as Counter strike that is totally based on killing people. Thus, laws should be made strict to discourage its usage.
However, Guns are not always to blame because sometime times it’s the surrounding environment and upbringing that also plays key role in producing criminal minds. For example, social discriminating culture, especially racism, often encourages people towards anti-social activities. There are countries with the highest gun possession but still with the lowest crime rate, such as Iceland where a person have to justify its every usage. So, authorities should ensure training regarding the consequences of weapon usage before handing gun to their citizen.
In conclusion, unrestricted access to firearms contributes a lot to increase in fatal shootings but surrounding atmosphere plays its role too. In the future, situation will only get worse if it is not restricted with strict rules.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15699658703 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7504297644 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5639089064 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16507368851 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514523459789 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07171758284 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10271900865 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553286717963 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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