The scenes that people, young and old, are participating in sports are frequently seen on TV and Internet. I think this phenomenon is a affirmative development that indicates keep fitness is becoming a common sense, because few people in the past spent time on exercise.
To start with, participation in sports indeed benefits to keep physical well being. According to a study from Oxford University, regular exercise significantly reduces the possiblity of heart attack and prolongs life. Besides, participating in exercise eliminates fatigue produced by work. Take myself for example, I would feel extremely uncomfortable if I did not work out in a week and I refresh myself by a 5 kilometers jogging.
I believe the improving living standard result the phenomenon. In modern era, the majority of people are fully educated who have sufficient time to exercise in various facilities. Firstly, these well educated individuals understand that regular exercise leads to health; thus, youngsters and oldsters are actively participating in sports. Secondly, individuals owns more spare time than pwople of last century due to the development of technology and democracy. Thirdly, numerous facilities provide various choices for sport lovers, who can choose to jog in part, play basketball in stadum or swim in a swimming pool. Therefore, people deem exercise as a essencial part of healthy life.
To recapitulate, the fact that people regardless young or old emphasis the important of exercise is an advancement comparing to last centuray. Actually, keeping fit is becoming a common sense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43951612903 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0812969037 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649193548387 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6325548385 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844005345557 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261823114827 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237007452523 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519476396353 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191683440691 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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