In some countries prisons are overcrowded which leads to many expenses for the government. To lessen the cost for prisoners’ cost of living, reduced sentences are implemented. What do you suggest could be done? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is true that we always make the distance from the criminal. In my opinion, we should need the distance from crime not criminal. I support to this think, some countries prisoners allowed comfortable accommodation, good food, and healthcare. my reasons are explain in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, people punished due to their bad activities. moreover, it is a chance to prisoners to improve their mistakes. Few of countries allowed good facilities to inmates such as, comfortable accommodation, good food and so on. Perhaps, it’s a great step in term to support the convict and create a healthy environment for all prisoners in captivity. Because, prisoners also need same healthcare treatment as people in the general population. moreover, accommodation is a basic need of human being and prisoners entitled to a minimum space of accommodation during the incarceration. such as in, India with special reference to Amritsar Central jail forms the focus of this section.
Secondly, it is a fact that the public usually has negative images to ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a bad personality. therefore, principles will be applicable on all convict. For example, there is a jail in Norway. Many of the guards in Halden prison don’t even carry guns. Another example is, one of the world’s only “open prisons,” Suomenlinna exists with no cells or locked doors at all. prisoners lives in shared houses with private rooms and allowed to work construction around various parts of the island. Hence, being a human man prisons also requires basics thing in captivity.
In conclusion, I am quite agree, if captivity environment will be pleasure and healthy then criminals can enhance their good thoughts. therefore, it is necessary to provide basic amenity to prisoners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32404181185 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10127627061 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1651985848 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181172079873 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501938438837 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412862803919 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948553967106 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457190656416 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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