Owing to the increase in pollution due to automobiles, many countries are finding an alternate and reliable source of energy which is eco-friendly. For this reason many counties are encouraging cycling to curb the pollution issue and to minimize traffic congestion in cities.
In today’s world with the advancement of modern technologies in the field of automobiles, one can experience a safe and a comfortably drive. In addition to that because of various flexible payment options one can easily purchase these cars. This has resulted in large number of car on road causing pollution and affecting the environment. Many countries are investing on research to find a cleaner and effective fuel. Automobile companies are now introducing eco-friendly cars which run on electric or Hybrid, however the price of these cars are way beyond the reach of a common man budget. So keeping in mind the price and its effect of the environment, many countries are encouraging use of cycles.
Cycles being economical and eco-friendly, many countries are encouraging their citizen to use cycle as it has many advantages. Firstly being eco-friendly, it does not cause pollution nor does it cause any harm to the environment. Secondly, cycling provides numerous health benefits. It is a very good exercise that develops body muscles and increases one’s stamina. Lastly in traffic congestion one can very easily maneuvers and avoid traffic. Cycles can maneuver is places where even two wheeler like bike and scooter cannot pass. It being economical can be easily afforded by weaker section of the society for travelling.
In my opinion investing on bicycles is not the right decision. Government should invest of improving the public transport by making it safer, cheaper and comfortable. Eco-friendly automobiles like electric car and hybrid car as they are recently introduced in market. These automobiles need to be available at a competitive price as compared to petrol and diesel cars. This will definitely attract people to use electric car or hybrid cars.
To conclude, government needs to take necessary action in preventing pollution but by investing on cycles is not a good decision. Government needs to invest of vehicles which run on Non- Renewable source of energy which will neither affect the environment nor affect the human being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...minimize traffic congestion in cities. In today's world with the advanceme...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('comfortably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('drive') instead of another adjective.
...omobiles, one can experience a safe and a comfortably drive. In addition to that because of various...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...s can maneuver is places where even two wheeler like bike and scooter cannot pass. It b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28954423592 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96550860994 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538873994638 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1566159839 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6818181818 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687384392223 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224373042072 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302284964467 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417520511147 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301925535032 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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