Museums are places of great importance as they preserve the historical, religious and cultural identity of a particular nations. Museum being of a great prestigious importance and being visited by everyone of all ages, many people are of the view that the entry fees should be free. However, I am of the opinion that though it is housing artifact of great importance, preserving them would definitely involves overhead expenses. So there should be an entry free for maintaining the artifacts and heritage.
In the past, where internet not being common to everyone. Parents had to take their children to the museum to have a glimpse of the artifacts and the models that was mentioned in their historical books. Ancient civilization taught in school too can be seen, which are made of wax models depicting their way of life. This really help children to visualize the ancient scenario.
However many people argue that National Monuments do not have entry fee, so why should museum which houses the nation artifacts and objects need to have entry fee. In today's world due to internet, any information is available at the finger tips. So people are referring to view monument on the mobile rather than practically viewing it. This has certainly caused reduction in the people visiting the museum. So to encourage the people to visit the museum the management needs to be competitive and remove the entry fee. This will definitely attract the new generating.
I, personally believe that having entry fees would restrict unnecessary crowding of people. The fees collected would certainly be used to preserve the ancient models. There are also overheads cost in maintaining the premises which cannot be neglected. Lavatories which are open to public, due to number of people using them they need cleaning regularly. This too involves cost. Similarly, the security system and personal installed to safe guard the expensive monuments involves cost. So with all these overhead and cost involved, the management has to levy a small fees in maintaining the asset of the nation. This according to me is justified.
In conclusion, for the museum to run successfully and to preserve the monuments and artifacts. Continuously inflow of funds are required by the management. There is no way the museum can generate revenue apart from imposing entry fees on visitors. If government funds the museum as a part of restoration program then the entry fees will definitely be withdrawn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nation
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
...tance, preserving them would definitely involves overhead expenses. So there should be a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n to visualize the ancient scenario. However many people argue that National Monumen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, similarly, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.48453608247 294% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 937.175257732 221% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 404.0 206.0 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12871287129 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75069391749 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 127.690721649 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522277227723 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 290.88556701 224% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 12.6804123711 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4445145187 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11028391177 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318198756219 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408644956708 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686341310463 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458832231121 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 41.2886597938 259% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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