In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural area in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?
Education has become a basic necessity for the betterment and upgradation of any country’s well-being. Unfortunately, this sector has never been put into light as a major concern for the society’s welfare. Good teachers are reluctant to work in the rural area which are comparatively densely populated than the urban areas, thus decreasing the literacy rate of third world countries. Reasons prior to this question would be illustrated in the essay.
It has been a long debate since centuries to eliminate the class system in the society and equality should be promoted among all the citizens of a country. Teachers, as being the sole responsible to nourish the young generation, express their dissatisfaction in providing education to the rural communities and there are obvious reasons behind it. Firstly, these areas are deprived of the basic necessities of life such as electricity, water supply, gas and transport to remote areas which would be the most crucial aspect for any good teacher from an urban area to survive without. The second reason would be the problem of hygiene. As the rural citizens are not aware of cleanliness and do not pay heed to this matter, it would prevent their children in acquiring quality education. The major obvious reason is the provision of low income to these hard-working teachers which they deserve for their dedication in making efforts to uplift children’s confidence and nurture their minds.
Teachers should be given equal respect and importance as compared to the other professions because they provide a healthy support to the backbone of the economy. Millions are being funded by the powerful countries but not being invested to improve the conditions of the rural areas. High income should be allocated to the good teachers based on their experience and skills. Projects such as USAID shall be promoted to provide high quality education to the remote underdeveloped communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, third, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27974276527 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93768927902 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5740501906 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215309180946 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068598878278 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722685161622 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148105454 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359322391422 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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