With the advancement of technology, communication has become easier. A few workplaces demand their staff to be available on their vacations as well. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of this development.
On the pro side, some roles require round the clock supervision, for example, hospitals, if an emergency occurs, it is necessary that the doctors and nurses are available on the floor, sometimes some cases need specialists, if there are not many, it becomes necessary to call the specialist on holidays. In addition, at some jobs, staff needs to be well informed on upcoming events, in such cases, it is required to call or email all of the employees and staff, to make sure everyone has the latest information.
On the con side, phoning or contacting the staff considered to be an invasion of their privacy. Moreover, nowadays people barely get any time to spend with their family, if they are being contacted continuously on their vacation about work-related matters, they feel obligated to attend the issue by abandoning their family which causes a huge amount of stress among staff and the productivity of their work decline gradually. Furthermore, work-life balance should be provided to the staff, that will provide them enough time to spend on their leisure activities without any interruptions.
In conclusion, employees contacting their staff has more disadvantages than advantages. In my opinion, staff should be able to enjoy their time off with their family without interference from work. This can be achieved by setting up proper human resource policies and guidelines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2480620155 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91980631449 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.8488891575 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298653622591 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118798130698 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734082713675 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178851556214 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599638329969 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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