Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There are some specialists who say children should commence to learn foreign language at primary school, while others think this training shall be started at secondary school. I mostly agree with the first idea and I am going to support my thought in the following statements.
Some experts advise to the education system to put a foreign language in the primary school curriculum. They may reasoning that students at primary school would learn better than secondary school pupils, since they are younger and their minds attract new subjects faster. In addition, in this way they have much more time to be dominance in one or even two languages, before entering to the college or university and hence, if they decide to go abroad for higher educations or for work purposes, they may face fewer troubles.
On the other hand, some educational scientists believe that learning another language for primary school students is not necessary. They might express that kids at those ages need more playing instead of studying a major part of their time, in other words, it is too soon for the primary schools’ children to be much busy by study. Furthermore, they may dislike the language that they are forced to practice and this may cause serious educational damages, which could not be compensated, and even in the future, they may not be interested in learning any languages.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of starting to learn a second language in primary school are more than its likely problems. As a suggestion, I think it is much better to consider the matter as an optional, so that only high talented and interested students take part in the foreign language learning program.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...tarted at secondary school. I am mostly agree with the first idea and I am going to s...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun troubles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ons or for work purposes, they may face less troubles. On the other hand, some educ...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to program'
Suggestion: to program
...e part in the foreign language learning program.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95804195804 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63820862525 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8409664114 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380366396418 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176799632541 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119575111747 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248729150456 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296078219105 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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