Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Learning foreign language become an essential part in this modern era. But acquiring this is not so easy or simple. It is a very lengthy process for an individual. Few experts suggest that it will be great if children learn foreign language from their primary level than high school level. I will discuss both of the pros and cons of that in my essay.

It is true that human brains start to reduce with increasing the age. As a result, their memory power becomes damage in this process. So, in the childhood, children can easily catch anything. They do not scare about the mistakes. Their memory possesses anything very quickly. In my opinion, it is the great time to learn other languages. For example, most of the children are familiar with three different languages such as English, Hindi and Arabic as well as Bangle from their childhood. These skills are not only making them wise but also helping them to maintain a wide community. Even they are connecting with overseas people and maintaining their relationship via social media which brings a lot of benefits for them.

On the other hand, in our educational system, there are almost 13 different subjects which have to be completed by our children in primary level. So, extra one subject for learning languages will be a big pressure for them. But I believe that it is possible by shorting the syllabus.

However, learning foreign languages have more benefits if we can use it in the proper way. It helps to communicate with different cultures people. Also, it helps to get a good job and leads to bring a well-developed life in future. So it is very important to learn it as soon as possible.

To sum up, it is a big responsibility for parents to make their children skillful with foreign languages and it is essential to make the opportunity as early as possible for them. I strongly believe that primary level is the best time to come it.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7245508982 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59264150106 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4581868541 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6086956522 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243040577391 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058210963224 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711384763795 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143063503191 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674510515315 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.