Some feel that countries should produce most of the food that is eaten in their country and import as little as possible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that country ought to focus in producing food that has been consumed by the their citizen instead of importing the food to other countries. In my opinion, I agree to this statement as the measure of this will improve economy of the individual country.
To maintain the economy, many countries are increasing their trade with other international countries. Import and export has become the major aspect among countries in order to earn more. Vegetables and fruits import has been increased in under-developed countries, with this the developed countries that is exporting the product will earn more from tax benefits. Consuming food from other countries will deliberately decrease the consumption of local food which eventually can decrease the economy of the local country.
On the other hand, if countries focus more on producing local food instead of exported foods, than automatically the consumption of the local food will increase as the demand will rise up and eventually the supply will risen. There would be more opportunities for local businesses in selling the food that they are producing. Additionally, foods that are originate from the individual country such as mangoes, which are produce more in India will be consumed by the Indian people. Since the fruits will be eaten by the local citizen the quality will also improved, as the high quality of foods will not be exported to other countries.
In Conclusion, some foods should be imported to other countries, however majority of foods must be produced and consumed locally. Government can play the vital role in maintaining the import and export and increasing the tax rate for the export can be the solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...roducing food that has been consumed by the their citizen instead of importing the food t...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'rise' or 'be risen'?
Suggestion: rise; be risen
... rise up and eventually the supply will risen. There would be more opportunities for ...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'originated'.
Suggestion: originated
...producing. Additionally, foods that are originate from the individual country such as man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75889084252 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467391304348 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2823312337 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20998888932 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968674791159 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575812367345 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14990017446 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287318666671 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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