There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. in your letter
Describe the event
say why you think he/she would be interested
suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her
Dear Pinal,
Hope you are well. I am writing this letter to inform you that most awaited live singing concert is going to be held on 15th March in my town. All the famous music artist such as Sonu Nigam, A.R. Rahman and your favourite Atif are going to perform live on the stage in the Natubhai Stadium in front of twenty thousand audiences.
Since you are preparing a documentary on music, attending this concert will help you understand the effect of music to the people. Additionally, we have not seen each other since six months, this could be the opportunity where we can hangout together again like old times.
I would suggest to book an air ticket in advance so that you do not have to worry about the cost. Additionally, tickets to the concert can be booked online, once you give you confirmation I will buy the ticket and we can meet directly at the concert day near the entrance of the gate.
Convey my love to family.
Waiting to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Parth
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest booking'.
Suggestion: suggest booking
...gether again like old times. I would suggest to book an air ticket in advance so that you do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61797752809 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35400632745 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.718099461 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182431848806 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633558891897 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451603573928 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830068077569 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528969166938 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.