Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes.
It is sometimes and right for a government to control the population this way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Other government stated that they can control how many children a family can have in their country. They can also control the number of children someone has through taxes. This way, government control the population and it is sometimes necessary and right. With this, I do agree and disagree with this kind of regulation. I agree because it may help our family and also our country to experience being poor. However, I do disagree also because government takes away the freedom of a human to live in this world.
In my opinion, I do agree, it is because if our government can limit our children, it can help our family and our country not to experience being poor. For example, we can only have three children, but accidentally, I got pregnant and I luckily, I am rich, so, I can pay his or her taxes. Also with this, if you go beyond the limit, it is your responsibility to work hard to pay his or her taxes as a parent. In addition to it, if you don't want to pay the tax for your fourth child, you can avoid having a baby or being pregnant by using safety precautions. However, I do disagree with this, it is because as a human you have the freedom to do, to decide and to make things that makes you happy. In this kind of regulation, with the same example, accidentally I got pregnant to our fourth child and our government only limit just three children, if not we will pay taxes for him. Suddenly, I am not able to pay more taxes and we are poor, we are on a fix income, what will happen to our children? If this will be the case and for example we lived in China, our fourth child will be eaten and i don't want that to happen. Even though I don't want it, I don't have a choice, I can't stop it, it is because that is our regulation. And we need to follow.
Therefore I agree to control our children to avoid suffering in the future. Also we humans must be responsible in all of decisions that we are going to make, to avoid mistakes and to avoid things that we dont want to happen. Also we must think not just ourselves but also for our family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 24.0651302605 332% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24234693878 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42525578628 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40306122449 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2455255109 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5263157895 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356024855955 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137454960283 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132947759172 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277859815567 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216008693102 0.056905535591 380% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.