Some parents believe that children in their Leisure should be involved in educational activities. While others believe it adds too much pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the increase in competition, parents are more concerned about their child's future.
Some parents think that juveniles should spend their free time in educational activities while rest of the people think that it creates pressure on them. I will discus on both views so that the feasible conclusion comes at end.
Nowadays many people trained their children to succeed in this tough competition,they make their kids involved in different academic activities for example extra tuition classes as, some schools and teachers have started giving deteriorated services because they are more indulged in publicity and marketing hence, parents put their children in tuition classes after school time so that they score magnificent in final exam. Although, some parents prefer send them in separate Institutes which help youngsters to think out of the box so that they act differently from others. Moreover, internet has played a elixir role in it those who wants to built more interest in studies go for online sessions such as you-tubes.
On the other hand, not every parents think like this. Some people think that leisure should be spend in other activities which helps in rejuvenating mind and children can relish it. Whereas if teenagers will keep on thinking about education, they will feel pressurized and that will deteriorate their performance hence, instead of making things aggravated, a child should use their free time in Sports that makes a person mentally and physically strong. However, watching TV can also mitigate the study pressure. For a better learning process it is must that mind should remain active.
By concluding this, no Doubt education is must end putting more effort to excel in studies is always good but sometimes to rejuvenate the mind it is crucial to get involved in other activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24149659864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62736553514 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.708426302 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232744615808 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777221251149 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588009283102 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121978634904 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043239018368 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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