Some parents and teachers think that children's behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. discuss both views and give your opinion
In today's era children are more smarter than us, they know how to behave at a particular situation so, mentors and Guardians prefer that juveniles behavior should be monitored and strictly controlled whereas some prefer that children should be independent to behave. In this essay, I discuss about the views on both statements so that at the end of feasible solution comes at the end .
Children are the future of the nation so, it is elixir to take care of their habits. To begin with, day-to-day activities create a long-lasting impact on your young child, the kind of people, discussions around then plays a pivotal role. In spite of this, a child should be aware about surroundings and they should be taught what is wrong and right for them. Although, offsprings represent the culture of the family hence, it is very crucial to teach basic manners.
No Doubt, it is vital to have control on the upbringing of grown ups but before controlling it parents and teachers should know where the kid is wrong so, they have to give them freedom to behave then analyze where juveniles are wrong or right. Inspite of correcting them at the initial stage and make them behave like parents or teachers, elders should correct at the point where they are actually making a mistake. Moreover, kids should also have their own personality and that would become if Elders will give freedom to them .
Bike including this, behavior should be controlled and not only correcting them to doing wrong but giving them Liberty to express them eventually helps in analyzing accurately where youngsters are wrong actually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
In todays era children are more smarter than us, they know how to behave at a p...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'juveniles'' or 'juvenile's'?
Suggestion: juveniles'; juvenile's
...n so, mentors and Guardians prefer that juveniles behavior should be monitored and strict...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd of feasible solution comes at the end . Children are the future of the na...
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Message: Did you mean 'discussions about'?
Suggestion: discussions about
...n your young child, the kind of people, discussions around then plays a pivotal role. In spite of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and right for them. Although, offsprings represent the culture of the family henc...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...come if Elders will give freedom to them . Bike including this, behavior sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, kind of, no doubt, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94833948339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53729576961 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4323985718 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255060170809 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927630607195 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802014026452 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153875158137 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724910648184 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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