Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Having a great number of toys is a fantasy that every child crave for, though only a few have it fulfilled by their parents. There are some parents who bring a lot of toys for their children keeping in mind that they might learn or indulge themselves and their time in playing with those.
Every given thing in an excess amount to any human being is always harmful and will not help in any good cause, so when it comes to children excess of toys can also have adverse effects. First of all, it distracts the child from other educational and recreational activities. It also makes a child stubborn and least interested in any human interaction as the child always crave for toys and chose his toy over any other human or thing. Another disadvantage of having many toys is that the more toys you offer a child the more he will ask for and henceforth the temptation and his way of asking will keep on growing.
In contrast with all the disadvantages being explained, there are some pros associated with it but only a few are worth mentioning. For example, the child will not push the parents for their time and attention as he will be indulged in playing with them, another can be he can learn quite a few things with those keeping in mind if the toys are educational supportive or help the child in creating something.
The disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages of a child having a number of toys, like any habit or thing that exceeds the required limit cause no good to any child or human. Hence, the toys that parents buy for their children should be under a limit and moreover, the selection of toys should also be in a way that it should help the child to learn and to expand the growth of his mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... of asking will keep on growing. In contrast with all the disadvantages being explai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47452229299 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3950759696 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464968152866 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8979549675 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397799506355 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166602666147 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738903095903 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272017439066 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796422848212 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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