Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Certain parents purchase a plethora of toys for their children to play. In this essay we will discuss both the merits and demerits of having excessive toys on a child.
Some parents have this notion that giving their children excessive toys will enhance their problem solving and learning skills as they will spend their time and knowledge in solving puzzles and problems. To elucidate, children playing crossword games aids in increasing English Vocabulary of children. Moreover, children learn to share their games with their friends and thus reduce fighting and conflicts. It also helps in nurturing the creativity and imagination in children. To exemplify, games like painting and art and craft encourages children to draw and colour drawings. Additionally, toys assist in improving fine and gross motors skills of children. They learn to run, swim, jump and grasping things.
Despite of the advantages there are few disadvantages associate with giving too many toys to children. Parents spending money indiscriminately in purchasing toys will impart the same knowledge to their children. They will not give importance to not only the hard-earned money but also they toys they have. This will spoil the overall personality and behaviour of children. Furthermore, children spending too much time in playing games will not pay attention to their studies and school work thus hampering their future.
To conclude, In this essay we have discussed that giving innumerable toys to children although will help in their cognitive development and learning skills, but it will also have negative effects on their education and they will not value for money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'toy'
...nly the hard-earned money but also they toys they have. This will spoil the overall ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3601532567 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70109779576 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2599475441 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251021727818 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102042341231 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715452740584 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18805486083 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036061331455 0.056905535591 63% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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