Some parents spend little free time with their children today.
Why is this?
Who do you think this affects more, parents or children?
Nowadays, parents often do not spend much of their free time with their children. This can be attributed to their increasingly demanding professional lives and changing lifestyles. In my opinion, I think that this trend impacts children negatively to a much larger extent than their parents.
There is a combination of reasons as to why parents are unable to spend time with their children. Firstly, it is becoming increasingly popular for both parents to be working these days. In addition, they work longer hours and often bring their work home with them, furthermore, their commutes from the work are longer. Consequently, they do not have enough time to spend with their children, even when they do, they are so tired and stressed out, they seldom want to bond and engage with their children. Secondly, current lifestyle promotes a more individualistic way of living, as a result, parents believe it is a good idea to give space to their children and thus, may not spend time with them because of it as well.
This growing societal trend of lack of time spent together by families, definitely has a far greater impact on the children as compared to their parents, and this is true especially for younger children. Since they need the attention, time, care and love of their parents for a healthy development of mind, body and soul. To illustrate, studies have shown that children who have both parents present during their formative years, end up doing far better in school, as well as adults in work. Not spending quality time with their parents can lead to a sense of loneliness and isolation, therefore, making children feel less loved, which can hamper their emotional growth and if not addressed can even cause long term mental issues.
In conclusion, lack of bonding and attention from their parents due to challenging work life can pose some serious problems for the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96540880503 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61426690302 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5081866936 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473632640058 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190639448799 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106999522673 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299069175662 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082783267553 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.