In some parts of the us, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, in the number of areas of United States there has been a rise in the restrictions imposed on movement of the people, especially the young ones after sunset has elapsed. However, they are allowed to go out if any mature member of the family accompanies them. In my opinion, I believe this to be a positive approach.
Firstly, such conditions are enfoced, when there are chances of any mishappenings, particularly social unrest. As during the night, there is often poor visibility, childrens might fall victim to such crimes due to the fact that they might not be clearly able to distinguish between the good and the bad conditions. To illustrate, if a child is allowed to roam outside during a situation when terriorist threat is immenient, consequences could be determinetal. As a result, if any elderly member or a relative takes the responsibility to accompany them, it could assist to avoid any danger posed to them.
Secondly, it is often seen that they fall victim to crimes, specifically coming under the influence of negative peer pressure. Such scenarios are extensively common when they lack proper care and support from their loved ones. Hence, if they are allowed to be outdoor during any catastrophic situation, a stranger with a criminal intentions can influence them to do wrong things, which otherwise could have been avoided. For instance, dual income parents appending a short amount of time with their offsprings may not be able to shower them with same affection like full time parents. Thus such individuals look for emotional attachment outside their family, eventually making them vulnerable to fall victims to trained people, who are expert in manipulating pupils in these age groups.
In conclusion, it is beneficial to avod letting out unmatured member of public when curfews are in force. This could assist to prevent any wrong doings because of their inability to distinguish between the situations and falling prey to strangers with criminal minds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14539007092 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99712527625 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0204682029 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24137693185 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693185951836 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947938302024 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155806309923 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117520163923 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.