Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Few individuals assume that those with a higher education have an opportunity to get a promising high-income post. However, other people predict that having a hands-on practice is a better solution for financially worthwhile employment. To get a job opportunity at first we need theoretical knowledge and a practical exposure as well.
A certain number of public think that, only those who have mastered in their profession will hold a chance in getting into a profitable money-spinning occupation. To get recruited into a prestigious organization, one initially needs to have a basic degree but even then it will not really pave the way for a better-earning employment. Because having only academic skills are not enough to become an outstanding employee. People are obliged to have a practical exposure too. For example, various institutions in India, selects their candidates based on their past skills rather than giving importance to their qualification.
On the other hand, fewer people validate that having practical skills with prior exposure have a better chance for a higher salary. As I mentioned earlier during the recruitment process the employers look for an experienced and exceptionally skilled candidate because they aim for quality assurance. Due to distinct rationales the expertise workers are usually more professional, goal-oriented, proficient and efficiently competent. For example, the selection commission of health care foreign affairs are pretty strict in selecting previously skilled professionals rather than knowledgeable degree holders.
To an extent, some citizens consider that one should have a higher-level of education to get an employment in a highly paid institution and others hope that they should have longer years of practical knowledge for a higher payment. In my point of view, I strongly believe that experience plays a vital role in achieving the job opportunities that pay higher.
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...importance to their educational degree. In the other hand, fewer people validate...
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...chieving job opportunity in high wages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57288135593 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16725925197 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0107101219 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162659320539 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591857786012 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399786102431 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105562522145 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411521110274 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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