Throughout the history of mankind, humans have faced many epidemics and pandemics. Medicine has played a crucial role in dealing with such diseases. However, as a commonly known fact, science requires experimentation. Sometimes these experimentations are conducted on animals in order to test a vaccine or medicine before they're released to the market. I believe this is a safer bet as prohitibiting animal trails will lead to untested products being consumed by the people.
Medicines and vaccines are not only required for humans but also for animals. In many farms across the world, cattles have suffered with different types of epidemics. These could only be trated after animals were experimented with different formulas and only after a successful recovery could the drug be released in the market to save more animals in the future. Also, for diseases affecting humans the drug is first administered on animals and if successul the human trials are conducted. Hence, an argument can be made that animals are experimented the same way humans are in such trials. Further, the risk of releasing a drug without experimentation could be catastrophic in nature and could lead to more deaths than the experimenation would require. Furthermoe, some pathogens spread from animals to humans. In such instances it becomes all the more important to analyse the samples collected form humans and animals alike to understand the effect of a pathogens.
Some animal rights group argue that experimentation on animals is not necessary and a potential alternative should be explored. However nothing full proof is currently available to scientists around the world. It is due to this lack of alternative that scientists are forced to conduct animals trials.
I believe that animals experiments should be conducted as per legal laws in the country until such time that we have an suitable alternative available.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...er to test a vaccine or medicine before theyre released to the market. I believe this ...
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Line 3, column 957, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pathogen' or simply 'pathogens'?
Suggestion: a pathogen; pathogens
...imals alike to understand the effect of a pathogens. Some animal rights group argue that...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tential alternative should be explored. However nothing full proof is currently availab...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...he country until such time that we have an suitable alternative available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30363036304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98227873083 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5760382445 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392378661406 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115665294812 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113590522665 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239692958376 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654754298036 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.