Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Experimenting on animals as alternatives for humans has always been debatable amongst some people. Although some people believe that these experiments are necessary to discover new scientific issues, many believe that this process should be banned by law. They argue that there must be an alternative for researchers and these experiments can be regulated.
On the one hand, scientists use animals to conduct scientific researches in academic laboratories. Using animals as laboratory materials has always been a good idea because there is some kind of creatures that are identical as human's genes. Besides, experimenting with animals will lower the cost of researches because we cannot simply use a person's body for academic purposes. For example, some types of mice offer the same cell behavior as our bodies. Consequently, we can apply some academic experiments on these animals instead of testing directly on people.
On the other hand, animals that are targeted by our research teams may suffer during the tests, or even some tests may be dangerous for their health and causing them to their death. In other words, we, as human beings, are targeting other creatures for our selfish desires and knowledge. Hence, it can be seen that animals, which are used in our labs, are not living their lives normally as other animals do.
In conclusion, while it is the only option for us to use animals in our medical research laboratories in order to improve our knowledge about medical sub-fields, we can still focus on finding alternative ways to conduct this researches without targetting animals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, hence, if, may, so, still, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76687995077 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5354252067 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315933434314 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130204322166 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713009513124 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20184679711 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101638598616 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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