Some people argue that a growing number of young people spend too much time in watching TV. Why does this phenomenon happen? And what kinds of activities should be encouraged to them?
T.V. has become a source of entertainment. Some individuals believe that youngsters are spending most of their time to watch television. This essay shall discuss various reasons behind rise of this trend and type of habits to be developed among juveniles.
One of the major reason is that in today's era, people prefer to live in nuclear family and both the parents are working to meet the financial needs. So, when their children come from school, they are alone at home and to pass their time, youngsters rely on T.V. As the time passes, young ones get addicted to the shows which are aired on television. However, there are many students who can not live without T.V. and watch television even when they are doing their homework. Another reason might be that young people want to stay alone most of the time as they become reserved and do not have any friends to go out with them and play outdoor games. As a result, they stay at home and have television as their friend.
Moving further, parents should be aware of the habits of their children. They should encourage their growing ones to play sports with other children by taking them to the nearby park daily in the evening which help in their physical and mental development. Besides that, parents should help their children to explore their interests and allow them join the extra classes such as music, dance, swimming etctera. In this way, youngsters can go to the classes and make new friends of their interest. Lastly, people can build the habit of reading useful books and novels among their dear ones by gifting them story books, books related to science and technology on occasions.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it is the prime responsibility of the parents to divert the mind of their children and indulge them in productive activities so that they so not watch T.V. for whole day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, lastly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74769230769 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34737975538 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7184785198 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167313811335 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600796466668 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403717684665 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104446171791 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273344093005 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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