Some people argue that a growing number of young people spend too much time in watching TV. Why does this phenomenon happen? And what kinds of activities should be encouraged to them?
The entertainment industry has rapidly grown in the past few years. And with the development of technology, there are various contents available today. Youngster today utilise most of the time in watching television. This essay will discuss the reason for this trend and what can be the best activity for a young person can take part in.
On the one hand, technology has evolved immensely even in the television industry. Today most of the TV is a smart TV, which has various features such as internet and other video streaming applications. Compared to earlier days today there are copious contents online, which are available through YouTube, Netflix, and Amazon Prime. Moreover, most of these applications target younger demographic people with their programmes. For example, series such as the game of Thrones is so popular among the youth that they spend hours in front of the television watching them. Additionally, there are numerous TV channels today compared to earlier days, so it gives more options to spend extra time in front of the television.
On the other hand, the young generation today are more obese than people decades ago. The primary reason for this is the sedentary lifestyle. People spend hours on their couch and do not indulge in any physical activity. Youngsters today must participate in more physical activities like joining a fitness club, playing a sport and so on. This will keep them fit and healthy which can help them concentrate and perform better at the workplace. For example, I was a person who used to spend hours watching TV and had gained unhealthy weight because of no physical activity, but after I started jogging regularly, I noticed a drastic improvement in my fitness level and my performance at work.
To conclude, spending hours watching television will make a person unfit. One must set restrictions on time spent watching tv and has to invest more time in playing outdoor.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.053125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68850090373 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1383433463 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202259882318 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590236613576 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398631783665 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126376172233 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135465084722 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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