Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.
The new era has witnessed a considerable amount of immigration recently. There are discussions about the various impacts of this approach which cultural diversity is one of which. Some people strongly believe that new commers should aspect the new culture, while others recommend preserving the original ethos by making small and local communities. This article is going to discus both views and determine which is more acceptable.
There is no doubt that each country has its own specific culture that distinguish it from other regions. Its really important to preserve these visions and express them to the new generation. It’s the dwellers’ responsibility to make this goal achieved. As immigrants decide to go to another country to seek more achievements and opportunities, they should respect the culture as the new dwellers. Furthermore, by adopting the new culture they would be more aware about the legislation which make less chaos and conflict.
At the other part of the spectrum, is necessary to not undermine the huge experiments immigrates especially adult ones have to where they belong. The old culture shapes immigrant’s identity and sense of belonging. By ignoring that they would face noting but a sense of alienation which would lead to detrimental mental issues such as depression and anxiety. If the have the opportunity to share their culture with their pears they would have more mental stability which is positive not only for themselves, bult also the new destination. Moreover, new cultures bring about more culture and diversity to countries. A multicultural community benefits its dwellers from more flexibility and acceptance which would undoubtedly culminate in a live and developed society which is the most important factor of a healthy environment.
In conclusion, both preserving the old culture and adopting a new culture have their own specific positive aspects. However, when immigrants are allowed to keep and admire their culture they would bring more diversity and mental stability to the new environment with is valuable and important
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...to countries. A multicultural community benefits its dwellers from more flexibility and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38226299694 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92680202191 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3165702649 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274082998933 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093706532003 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586236662745 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18701786345 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366611500865 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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