Some people become famous at young age. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
It is a natural instinct in human being for their admiration to be famous and people would be attracted by their remarkable personality. It is undoubtedly, a huge success for someone who has attained a title at a very young age. I will discuss its pros and cons in this essay.
As a matter of fact, fame does not come at the doorsteps of anybody’s home. It is the lust of a thriving man who works day and night to achieve prosperity. People tend to appreciate the efforts they put in to lead a successful life. There are a huge number of people who does the same, but are unable to reach the hall of fame, probably because of their bad luck or lack of moral or financial support. Therefore, it is a major achievement for an individual to prosper at an early age.
Adolescences who become famous, leads a very different life from others. They, indeed, have gone through many sacrifices in their personal and professional lives, but in spite of all these, maintaining a modest image in front of media and fans is the greatest challenge every successful person should be aware of. A young individual tends to be more carried away by flattering and appreciation as compared to the older, mature people. This would lead to arrogance and be outrageous in the personality which adversely effects and misinterprets the sound image of that person.
To sum up, it has both bright and dark sides. Being famous in the eyes of the world at a young age is itself an achievement but an egoistic attitude towards the admirers should be eliminated from the personality in order to have a balanced, happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erprets the sound image of that person. To sum up, it has both bright and dark s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, as a matter of fact, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66549295775 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78525133071 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5539745802 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153069825607 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050185810046 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453252451388 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963852101362 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282808103774 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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