Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The manner in which children have their own right to decide themselves has recently sparked an intense debate. Notwithstanding contested by many people that the matter of allowing children to decide on daily stuff is highly beneficial, others fell that kids, who are allowed to choose what they want, will build up selfish characteristics. This essay will examine both points of view before rendering a plausible conclusion.
On the one hand, some people argue that the benefits of nurturing a child with freedom of making choices considerably outrank its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that children growing up with the right to give their own decisions on everyday basic needs has a better ability to deal with challenges in the following years. According to scientific research, for instance, reported that most of the children, who are empowered to give their choices or opinions in every situation they encounter, might have better results in solving problems than those who are always relied on guidance and never dare to do something out of the box.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often claimed that in fact indulging kids in every aspect of their life will lead to selfish characteristics and supreme personalism later on, which might adversely impact our society. As allowing children to do anything, children usually tend not to pay any attention to other’s needs, they only focus on what they desire and arbitrarily influence on other people’s interests. Researchers from RMIT University, for illustration, reported that Asian children born in an affluent family were raised in an unrestricted environment due to traditional custom and culture, they usually have selfish behaviors as well as fewer contributions to the society.
In conclusion, the aforesaid discussion illustrates how nuances that children were raised, which makes it impossible to offer a certain choice. For me, I personally incline to give children a full right to decide on everyday situations in their life, parent only play a role of orientation and inspiration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a role of orientation and inspiration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96554026541 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6102243448 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.166666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257590406075 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846680750473 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047973255695 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147274199597 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404645085143 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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