Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Human is a social animal and they always like to be surronded by society,which made of differnt kind of people with distint choices,likes,opinians,thinkings and so on. Some of them are very liberal for themselves and for their kids,and believe that it is important to make decisions about themselves and few other think,that it make them alone or selfish from young age.
In our society on one hand we could see individuals,who are very forward and independent in nature,morever they also wnt their kids to be indepedent for their basic everyday matters. I think this kind of approch prepare child autonomous and confident. although they also learn some good life lessons like their limit,consequence of wrong choice,what is right and wrong and so forth. As per my opinion people need to allow children to make their own decision at apropriate age because self learning is the best tool to train your self for future.
On other hand we could also see some people who do not want their kids to make their own choice beacause they think,it mat may harm the society by making their children more self centric or selfish but this is disbelief i would say rather then a concern. nowadays in cutthrot atmospher kids should be able to make their decision as it might help them to become strong human being from the tender age who could make society better day by day. so again as per me let our kids give some freedom and let them open their wings to fly in this whole sky and make them learn by their self,though they will fall but they will learn to fly and definitely become more confident and achiver in life.
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...and definitely become more confident and achiver in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72438162544 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97838987174 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6154575095 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.555555556 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30416168996 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123424520211 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761621464398 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210699695692 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208944552761 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.