Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Now a days, plethora of children are starting to present their own viewpoints and choices on everyday matters whether pertaining to food, clothes and entertainment. Some people opine that this will result selfish individuals in a society, on the other side some people believe, it is indispensable for children to make decisions about matters that affects them. This essay will discuss both of these views in the following paragraphs.
It is crucial for parents to take care the demands or choices of their kids. Although, it totally depends upon parents, which type of wishes or choices of their children is appropriate to fulfil, certainly parents guidance still there to enlighten them. Because, having choices in everyday matters can teach a children about self in-dependency and build confidence in early stage of life. It also teach them to face the consequences of their prompt decisions whether it is right or not. Many humans believe parents should follow the choices of their children as it is their duty and they have all the rights about choosing their favourite colour, food item or source of entertainment. A child from America or any developed country is more independent and confident as compared to any undeveloped nation because of their independent choices and decisions
On the other side, some people suggest giving children freedom to make their own choices can make them selfish or a individual who only think about their own wishes. It is possible sometime children become rigid to their choices and starting to trample on their wishes and then gradually they become habitual for the same, which later turn them into a selfish person. So, sometime it is necessary to restrict them for their wishes or choices to make. People can overcome this situation by teaching them to respect the feelings of other people.
In conclusion, it is important for society to allow children to make their own wishes as it is a best lesson he or she can learn from experience, simultaneously taking care about their decision whether it is right or wrong is responsibility of their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06340057637 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71175890449 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.310949062 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471461130721 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159001102922 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985891605123 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292963936653 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506526297418 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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