Many people would argue that success at a sport can be related to an innate talent, while others would claim that such achievement can be gained by regular training and persistence. This essay will discuss both opinions and present the support of the latter view, as practice is essential to acquire excellence in any sport.
On the one hand, there are athletes who where born to be naturally successful in certain sports. This means that their genetics contribute to their natural ability to play a specific game, therefore not much hard work is needed to perform remarkably great compared to other players not naturally gifted. A good illustration is Usain Bolt, considered the faster man alive, who showed, since early age, an impressive aptitude for running, which made him the most famous sprinter in recent times. Thus, people support the idea that predisposition to become an outstanding player requires an inborn talent after all.
On the other hand, lie the sportsmen who devoted their lives to achieve greatness through hard working and numerous training sessions. Although they lack a natural talent, they compensate it by putting much more effort into their passion. The main reason to believe that practice makes perfect is the preparation behind it. Therefore, expert players tend to perform better than those who are born gifted but are unexperienced, as high performance athletes need to practice every day to excel in their profession. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best soccer player in the world, is the first to arrive for training and the last to leave, as he knows that excellence requires sacrifices and ability comes from preparation. Therefore, it is easy to see that natural talent still does not diminish the great importance of practicing and training.
To conclude, success does not come easily; having an innate talent is not enough, thereby hard work and experience are still crucial tools to make a successful athlete.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, after all, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15576323988 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62385570182 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7991041216 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252477184273 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816921522691 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580492809933 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153248600385 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617784362793 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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